IELTS Writing Task 2（エッセイ）の型と表現

設問：In many countries, more people now work from home. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? ／【序論】Over the past decade, working from home has become common in many countries, largely because of faster internet connections and the spread of video-calling tools. Although this trend has some drawbacks, I believe its advantages are more significant. 【本論1：欠点】Admittedly, remote work can make communication between colleagues more difficult. When people do not share an office, small questions that could be answered in seconds may take hours to resolve by email. Some employees, especially those who live alone, may also feel isolated, and new staff may find it harder to learn from experienced colleagues. However, these problems can be reduced if companies hold regular online meetings or ask staff to come into the office once or twice a week. 【本論2：利点】The main benefit of working from home is that it saves employees a considerable amount of time. Commuting to a city office can take more than an hour each way, and this time can instead be used to rest, spend time with family or pursue further study. Employees who are less tired are also likely to concentrate better. For example, a parent who no longer needs to catch an early train can take their children to school and still start work on time. Companies can also benefit, as they may need smaller and cheaper offices. In addition, having fewer commuters on the roads means less traffic and lower carbon emissions, which benefits society as a whole. 【結論】In conclusion, although remote work may weaken communication in the workplace, this problem can largely be managed. The time it saves and its benefits for society therefore make it a positive development overall.