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✍️ 絶滅は自然なのに、なぜ守るのか

🦋 生物・進化・生態系|★★★ 難関|英文 約415語

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If Extinction Is Natural, Why Should We Worry?

It is sometimes said that extinction is a natural process, and therefore nothing to be alarmed about. Indeed, throughout the long history of life, countless species have appeared and then disappeared, and mass disappearances have even occurred in the distant past, long before humans existed, and the living things we see today are only a small portion of those that have ever existed. From this fact, some people conclude that efforts to protect endangered species amount to a futile attempt to resist nature.

The first half of this argument is correct, but the conclusion does not follow. What matters is not that species disappear but the speed at which they do so. Natural extinctions usually unfold over very long periods, during which other organisms have time to adapt, to evolve, and to fill the space left behind. When human activity, such as the destruction of habitats or the spread of species into new areas, removes many species within a short span, the ecosystem loses the time it needs to recover. To say that both processes are “natural” is to ignore this crucial difference in pace.

There is also the matter of interdependence. Organisms are connected through webs of feeding, pollination, and shelter, so the loss of one species may affect many others in ways that are hard to predict. A predator that vanishes may allow its prey to multiply and strip the vegetation; a plant that disappears may leave the insects that depend on it without food. Because these chains of effects are complex, the damage often becomes visible only after it has become hard to reverse. Ecologists therefore describe biodiversity as a kind of insurance, which helps living communities to withstand sudden changes.

Some critics raise a practical objection: resources for conservation are limited, and money spent on a small, unattractive creature might be better used for human needs. This concern is not unreasonable. Yet protecting habitats, rather than single species, often benefits people as well, since forests, wetlands, and coastal areas provide clean water, protection from floods, and food. Moreover, protecting a healthy habitat is usually cheaper than trying to repair one after it has been damaged. In such cases the choice is not between nature and humanity.

Thus, the statement that extinction is natural is true but incomplete. The pace, the interdependence, and the human role all change how we should judge what is happening. Accepting change in nature does not require us to accept every loss that we ourselves have caused.

※この英文は原田英語のオリジナルです。

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次の英文を150字以内の日本語で要約しなさい。
Summarize the passage in about 70 words in English.

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日本語で要約した答案を採点してもらう
あなたは大学入試の要約問題の採点者です。次の【英文】を150字以内の日本語で要約した【私の答案】を、100点満点で採点してください。

配点:内容(要点)50点/構成と論理20点/表現20点/字数と形式10点

次の順番で、やさしい日本語で答えてください。
1. 各観点の得点と、その理由
2. 減点された箇所の具体的な指摘(該当部分を引用して)
3. 直した例(1つだけ)
4. 次に直すべき点を3つ

採点の注意:原文の言い回しの丸写しは減点。具体例や数字を入れすぎていたら減点。自分の意見が混ざっていたら減点。字数は制限の90〜100%が理想。

【制限字数】150

【英文】
It is sometimes said that extinction is a natural process, and therefore nothing to be alarmed about. Indeed, throughout the long history of life, countless species have appeared and then disappeared, and mass disappearances have even occurred in the distant past, long before humans existed, and the living things we see today are only a small portion of those that have ever existed. From this fact, some people conclude that efforts to protect endangered species amount to a futile attempt to resist nature.

The first half of this argument is correct, but the conclusion does not follow. What matters is not that species disappear but the speed at which they do so. Natural extinctions usually unfold over very long periods, during which other organisms have time to adapt, to evolve, and to fill the space left behind. When human activity, such as the destruction of habitats or the spread of species into new areas, removes many species within a short span, the ecosystem loses the time it needs to recover. To say that both processes are “natural” is to ignore this crucial difference in pace.

There is also the matter of interdependence. Organisms are connected through webs of feeding, pollination, and shelter, so the loss of one species may affect many others in ways that are hard to predict. A predator that vanishes may allow its prey to multiply and strip the vegetation; a plant that disappears may leave the insects that depend on it without food. Because these chains of effects are complex, the damage often becomes visible only after it has become hard to reverse. Ecologists therefore describe biodiversity as a kind of insurance, which helps living communities to withstand sudden changes.

Some critics raise a practical objection: resources for conservation are limited, and money spent on a small, unattractive creature might be better used for human needs. This concern is not unreasonable. Yet protecting habitats, rather than single species, often benefits people as well, since forests, wetlands, and coastal areas provide clean water, protection from floods, and food. Moreover, protecting a healthy habitat is usually cheaper than trying to repair one after it has been damaged. In such cases the choice is not between nature and humanity.

Thus, the statement that extinction is natural is true but incomplete. The pace, the interdependence, and the human role all change how we should judge what is happening. Accepting change in nature does not require us to accept every loss that we ourselves have caused.

【私の答案】
(ここに自分の要約を貼る)
英語で要約した答案を採点してもらう
You are a strict but kind grader for university entrance exam summary tasks. Grade my summary of the passage below out of 100 points.

Scoring: Content (key points) 50 / Structure and logic 20 / Language (grammar, vocabulary, paraphrasing) 20 / Length and format 10.

Please answer in Japanese in this order:
1. Score for each category with reasons
2. Specific problems (quote the words in my summary)
3. One improved version of my summary
4. Three things to fix next time

Rules: copying whole sentences from the passage loses points. Use third-person, present tense. The ideal length is 90–110% of the target.

Target length: about 70 words

Passage:
It is sometimes said that extinction is a natural process, and therefore nothing to be alarmed about. Indeed, throughout the long history of life, countless species have appeared and then disappeared, and mass disappearances have even occurred in the distant past, long before humans existed, and the living things we see today are only a small portion of those that have ever existed. From this fact, some people conclude that efforts to protect endangered species amount to a futile attempt to resist nature.

The first half of this argument is correct, but the conclusion does not follow. What matters is not that species disappear but the speed at which they do so. Natural extinctions usually unfold over very long periods, during which other organisms have time to adapt, to evolve, and to fill the space left behind. When human activity, such as the destruction of habitats or the spread of species into new areas, removes many species within a short span, the ecosystem loses the time it needs to recover. To say that both processes are “natural” is to ignore this crucial difference in pace.

There is also the matter of interdependence. Organisms are connected through webs of feeding, pollination, and shelter, so the loss of one species may affect many others in ways that are hard to predict. A predator that vanishes may allow its prey to multiply and strip the vegetation; a plant that disappears may leave the insects that depend on it without food. Because these chains of effects are complex, the damage often becomes visible only after it has become hard to reverse. Ecologists therefore describe biodiversity as a kind of insurance, which helps living communities to withstand sudden changes.

Some critics raise a practical objection: resources for conservation are limited, and money spent on a small, unattractive creature might be better used for human needs. This concern is not unreasonable. Yet protecting habitats, rather than single species, often benefits people as well, since forests, wetlands, and coastal areas provide clean water, protection from floods, and food. Moreover, protecting a healthy habitat is usually cheaper than trying to repair one after it has been damaged. In such cases the choice is not between nature and humanity.

Thus, the statement that extinction is natural is true but incomplete. The pace, the interdependence, and the human role all change how we should judge what is happening. Accepting change in nature does not require us to accept every loss that we ourselves have caused.

My summary:
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