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SUMMARY DOJO

✍️ 自然は競争だけの世界か

🦋 生物・進化・生態系|★★☆ 標準|英文 約295語

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Is Nature Only a Competition?

When people imagine nature, they often picture a fierce competition in which every creature fights for its own survival. The phrase “survival of the fittest” is often understood in this way. According to this picture, only the strongest and the fastest can succeed, and kindness has no place in the wild.

However, careful observation of living things suggests a more complicated story. Many plants and animals depend on partners of a different kind. Flowers offer sweet liquid to insects, and in return the insects carry pollen from one plant to another. Small fish clean the skin of larger fish, gaining a meal while removing harmful pests. In such relationships, both sides gain something they could not easily get alone. Such partnerships are found in forests, oceans, and even in the soil under our feet.

Cooperation exists even within a single species. Some animals live in groups where members warn each other of danger or take care of young that are not their own. Such behavior can help the group survive, and a group that survives can pass on the habits that made it strong. Therefore, what is “fit” is often not the most powerful individual but the one that fits well with others.

It would be a mistake, though, to say that nature is simply friendly. Competition for food and space is real, and cooperation sometimes breaks down when one partner takes more than it gives, and a partner that gives too little is sometimes driven away. Both forces are at work, and their balance changes with the situation.

In short, nature is neither purely a battlefield nor a peaceful garden. Recognizing the importance of cooperation helps us understand living things more accurately, and it may also change how we think about our own societies.

※この英文は原田英語のオリジナルです。

📝 語彙ヒント 6語

💡 ヒント:survival of the fittest の fit の意味を筆者が読み替えている箇所(Therefore 以降)が最大のポイントです。世間の見方と筆者の見方の対比を意識して書きましょう。

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次の英文を120字以内の日本語で要約しなさい。
Summarize the passage in about 50 words in English.

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日本語で要約した答案を採点してもらう
あなたは大学入試の要約問題の採点者です。次の【英文】を120字以内の日本語で要約した【私の答案】を、100点満点で採点してください。

配点:内容(要点)50点/構成と論理20点/表現20点/字数と形式10点

次の順番で、やさしい日本語で答えてください。
1. 各観点の得点と、その理由
2. 減点された箇所の具体的な指摘(該当部分を引用して)
3. 直した例(1つだけ)
4. 次に直すべき点を3つ

採点の注意:原文の言い回しの丸写しは減点。具体例や数字を入れすぎていたら減点。自分の意見が混ざっていたら減点。字数は制限の90〜100%が理想。

【制限字数】120

【英文】
When people imagine nature, they often picture a fierce competition in which every creature fights for its own survival. The phrase “survival of the fittest” is often understood in this way. According to this picture, only the strongest and the fastest can succeed, and kindness has no place in the wild.

However, careful observation of living things suggests a more complicated story. Many plants and animals depend on partners of a different kind. Flowers offer sweet liquid to insects, and in return the insects carry pollen from one plant to another. Small fish clean the skin of larger fish, gaining a meal while removing harmful pests. In such relationships, both sides gain something they could not easily get alone. Such partnerships are found in forests, oceans, and even in the soil under our feet.

Cooperation exists even within a single species. Some animals live in groups where members warn each other of danger or take care of young that are not their own. Such behavior can help the group survive, and a group that survives can pass on the habits that made it strong. Therefore, what is “fit” is often not the most powerful individual but the one that fits well with others.

It would be a mistake, though, to say that nature is simply friendly. Competition for food and space is real, and cooperation sometimes breaks down when one partner takes more than it gives, and a partner that gives too little is sometimes driven away. Both forces are at work, and their balance changes with the situation.

In short, nature is neither purely a battlefield nor a peaceful garden. Recognizing the importance of cooperation helps us understand living things more accurately, and it may also change how we think about our own societies.

【私の答案】
(ここに自分の要約を貼る)
英語で要約した答案を採点してもらう
You are a strict but kind grader for university entrance exam summary tasks. Grade my summary of the passage below out of 100 points.

Scoring: Content (key points) 50 / Structure and logic 20 / Language (grammar, vocabulary, paraphrasing) 20 / Length and format 10.

Please answer in Japanese in this order:
1. Score for each category with reasons
2. Specific problems (quote the words in my summary)
3. One improved version of my summary
4. Three things to fix next time

Rules: copying whole sentences from the passage loses points. Use third-person, present tense. The ideal length is 90–110% of the target.

Target length: about 50 words

Passage:
When people imagine nature, they often picture a fierce competition in which every creature fights for its own survival. The phrase “survival of the fittest” is often understood in this way. According to this picture, only the strongest and the fastest can succeed, and kindness has no place in the wild.

However, careful observation of living things suggests a more complicated story. Many plants and animals depend on partners of a different kind. Flowers offer sweet liquid to insects, and in return the insects carry pollen from one plant to another. Small fish clean the skin of larger fish, gaining a meal while removing harmful pests. In such relationships, both sides gain something they could not easily get alone. Such partnerships are found in forests, oceans, and even in the soil under our feet.

Cooperation exists even within a single species. Some animals live in groups where members warn each other of danger or take care of young that are not their own. Such behavior can help the group survive, and a group that survives can pass on the habits that made it strong. Therefore, what is “fit” is often not the most powerful individual but the one that fits well with others.

It would be a mistake, though, to say that nature is simply friendly. Competition for food and space is real, and cooperation sometimes breaks down when one partner takes more than it gives, and a partner that gives too little is sometimes driven away. Both forces are at work, and their balance changes with the situation.

In short, nature is neither purely a battlefield nor a peaceful garden. Recognizing the importance of cooperation helps us understand living things more accurately, and it may also change how we think about our own societies.

My summary:
(paste your summary here)

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