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✍️ 全員が豊かになれば格差は問題でないか

📊 経済・格差・働き方|★★★ 難関|英文 約426語

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Does Inequality Matter If Everyone Gets Richer?

A familiar defense of economic inequality goes like this: if the economy grows and everyone becomes better off, it does not matter that some people gain much more than others. What counts, according to this view, is that living standards rise for all, not how the gains are shared. The argument has a certain appeal, since it points to a real achievement: many goods that were once luxuries are now available to ordinary households.

Yet this defense overlooks the fact that people live not only in absolute terms but also in relation to one another. When the gap between the wealthy and the rest grows very wide, it can change the way society works. Families with more resources can buy better education, healthcare, and connections for their children, so that opportunities are passed down rather than earned. A child born into a poor household may work just as hard as one born into a rich one, yet face very different prospects, and the difference is not a matter of talent. Over time, this weakens the belief that effort is rewarded, and a society in which that belief is lost tends to lose trust in its institutions.

There is also a political dimension. Those with great wealth may find it easier to influence the rules that govern everyone, from taxation to regulation. Public debate, too, can be shaped by those who own the means of communication. Even if no one acts dishonestly, the perception that the system favors the few can lead ordinary citizens to feel that their voices no longer matter. Economic disparity thus becomes a question not only of income but also of democratic legitimacy.

It would be a mistake, however, to conclude that the best solution is to make everyone's income equal. Differences in reward can encourage people to take risks, to learn new skills, and to create new businesses, and policies that ignore these incentives may reduce the wealth available to share. The real difficulty is to find a balance: enough difference to motivate effort, but not so much that opportunity itself becomes unequal.

What, then, should be done? There is no single answer, but ideas such as broad access to education and fair taxation deserve consideration. Whatever measures are chosen, the underlying principle should be that prosperity is judged not only by how large the economy grows, but also by how widely its benefits are shared. This is not a call for envy, but for attention to the conditions that allow everyone to take part in the economy and in public life.

※この英文は原田英語のオリジナルです。

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次の英文を150字以内の日本語で要約しなさい。
Summarize the passage in about 70 words in English.

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日本語で要約した答案を採点してもらう
あなたは大学入試の要約問題の採点者です。次の【英文】を150字以内の日本語で要約した【私の答案】を、100点満点で採点してください。

配点:内容(要点)50点/構成と論理20点/表現20点/字数と形式10点

次の順番で、やさしい日本語で答えてください。
1. 各観点の得点と、その理由
2. 減点された箇所の具体的な指摘(該当部分を引用して)
3. 直した例(1つだけ)
4. 次に直すべき点を3つ

採点の注意:原文の言い回しの丸写しは減点。具体例や数字を入れすぎていたら減点。自分の意見が混ざっていたら減点。字数は制限の90〜100%が理想。

【制限字数】150

【英文】
A familiar defense of economic inequality goes like this: if the economy grows and everyone becomes better off, it does not matter that some people gain much more than others. What counts, according to this view, is that living standards rise for all, not how the gains are shared. The argument has a certain appeal, since it points to a real achievement: many goods that were once luxuries are now available to ordinary households.

Yet this defense overlooks the fact that people live not only in absolute terms but also in relation to one another. When the gap between the wealthy and the rest grows very wide, it can change the way society works. Families with more resources can buy better education, healthcare, and connections for their children, so that opportunities are passed down rather than earned. A child born into a poor household may work just as hard as one born into a rich one, yet face very different prospects, and the difference is not a matter of talent. Over time, this weakens the belief that effort is rewarded, and a society in which that belief is lost tends to lose trust in its institutions.

There is also a political dimension. Those with great wealth may find it easier to influence the rules that govern everyone, from taxation to regulation. Public debate, too, can be shaped by those who own the means of communication. Even if no one acts dishonestly, the perception that the system favors the few can lead ordinary citizens to feel that their voices no longer matter. Economic disparity thus becomes a question not only of income but also of democratic legitimacy.

It would be a mistake, however, to conclude that the best solution is to make everyone's income equal. Differences in reward can encourage people to take risks, to learn new skills, and to create new businesses, and policies that ignore these incentives may reduce the wealth available to share. The real difficulty is to find a balance: enough difference to motivate effort, but not so much that opportunity itself becomes unequal.

What, then, should be done? There is no single answer, but ideas such as broad access to education and fair taxation deserve consideration. Whatever measures are chosen, the underlying principle should be that prosperity is judged not only by how large the economy grows, but also by how widely its benefits are shared. This is not a call for envy, but for attention to the conditions that allow everyone to take part in the economy and in public life.

【私の答案】
(ここに自分の要約を貼る)
英語で要約した答案を採点してもらう
You are a strict but kind grader for university entrance exam summary tasks. Grade my summary of the passage below out of 100 points.

Scoring: Content (key points) 50 / Structure and logic 20 / Language (grammar, vocabulary, paraphrasing) 20 / Length and format 10.

Please answer in Japanese in this order:
1. Score for each category with reasons
2. Specific problems (quote the words in my summary)
3. One improved version of my summary
4. Three things to fix next time

Rules: copying whole sentences from the passage loses points. Use third-person, present tense. The ideal length is 90–110% of the target.

Target length: about 70 words

Passage:
A familiar defense of economic inequality goes like this: if the economy grows and everyone becomes better off, it does not matter that some people gain much more than others. What counts, according to this view, is that living standards rise for all, not how the gains are shared. The argument has a certain appeal, since it points to a real achievement: many goods that were once luxuries are now available to ordinary households.

Yet this defense overlooks the fact that people live not only in absolute terms but also in relation to one another. When the gap between the wealthy and the rest grows very wide, it can change the way society works. Families with more resources can buy better education, healthcare, and connections for their children, so that opportunities are passed down rather than earned. A child born into a poor household may work just as hard as one born into a rich one, yet face very different prospects, and the difference is not a matter of talent. Over time, this weakens the belief that effort is rewarded, and a society in which that belief is lost tends to lose trust in its institutions.

There is also a political dimension. Those with great wealth may find it easier to influence the rules that govern everyone, from taxation to regulation. Public debate, too, can be shaped by those who own the means of communication. Even if no one acts dishonestly, the perception that the system favors the few can lead ordinary citizens to feel that their voices no longer matter. Economic disparity thus becomes a question not only of income but also of democratic legitimacy.

It would be a mistake, however, to conclude that the best solution is to make everyone's income equal. Differences in reward can encourage people to take risks, to learn new skills, and to create new businesses, and policies that ignore these incentives may reduce the wealth available to share. The real difficulty is to find a balance: enough difference to motivate effort, but not so much that opportunity itself becomes unequal.

What, then, should be done? There is no single answer, but ideas such as broad access to education and fair taxation deserve consideration. Whatever measures are chosen, the underlying principle should be that prosperity is judged not only by how large the economy grows, but also by how widely its benefits are shared. This is not a call for envy, but for attention to the conditions that allow everyone to take part in the economy and in public life.

My summary:
(paste your summary here)

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